A Futuristic Picnic... With Bottles!

The true reason I decided to start this was not to play woe is me about my current job situation. I actually do love my job and my students. I have some wonderfully "special" children in my class and it is them that I want everyone else to know more about. So for the first installment of Problematic Papers, I give you "The Discover of some thing string":

"We finally made it! I shouted to Yohana and Mitsy!
The year is 2200 and landed on a new planet.
We were trying to look for food and fruit and also alot of water. But When we were finding food, water and fruit. We didn't see nothing of all the things we wanted to eat.
First, We go walking on the hills of the mountain. When We go walking we go play then find water, food and fruit again because we were so hungry that I was so tirsty of water and so of eating food and fruit.
Then, We sleep in the night because when it was night we always fall asleep. But when there's sun we wake up. And when we wake up we go find food and fruits and alot of Water together and when we find it we were finding it every where and when we find it every where we saw all of them in the place we were finding it in the place. Next, We were getting every bottle so we could eat food and fruits and water all together in the new planet.
And worried to get every thing that we liked.

I think this student is my favorite writer. Yes, English is a new language, but still. It is fun to try to understand how all of this makes sense when said student is writing it. This is not the last you will hear from this amazing character.